Emerson

I go by a fake name. It's less security and more I enjoy the mystery of it. It started out as security, but I don't care who knows my name ...

Like jack said, only I have an add in. Shut off your internal editor and crap radar. Just write it. Keep in mind that no matter what you put on ...

First I'll explain some missing stuff or stuff to be fixed then I'll point out somethings... This poem isn't in structured or rhythm form, and it doesn't rhyme. But, it ...

Look I'm reading again! oooh I love emotions and random guys injecting stuff into jon.... ^_^ I have nothing else to say really...not actually a critique. Ummm good job? Yes!

I have night terrors sometimes. - Rosen Are you lonely?

I think I like Jaikal. Cynical is always pleasing. - Rosen I'm so tired of metaphors. They seem a bit bland. - Clive

It's like GI Joe! Sounds like a humorous novel about war, or a communist country, or a mans passion for communism. If it really was a comedy, I'd buy it! ...

20,000 Names Amazing site. They have names organized by country, then by gender. They also have "special categories" and give you the meaning/origin of the name. (Though has never mattered ...

sort of a pun on the usual "love at first sight" so it's kind of cute in that respect. but it doesn't roll the same as the phrase it was ...

Much too long. And it tells me nothing about the story, sort of. It gives off a fantasy vibe though. The Bloody Curtain

Did raven say I need to turn into a peach ? That is one thing I cannot do. - Vadoma I wish I had more to say... - Rosen

1. Don't post in caps. Ever. 2. Why not write your own? 3. This should...probably not go here. 'lyrical poetry' is not 'lyrics' for music. But umm... I can't move ...

I'd have to say Nanowrimo taught me that you ARE allowed to write bad, so long as you get it written enough to salvage something later...

Ah unbelievable amount of thank to you! That was very helpful, and I think I don't even need anymore advice on it...That was exactly what I was looking for? Yes, ...

congrats! (I never got a post on my winning...oh well :P I wanted to remember the outrageous number I got xP)