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It sounds so ...weird. I wouldn't pick it up, because I have no clue what it is, or what it is about... The Possible Decline of Love

Jesus, we he trying to rip Jon's heart out? we he=was he "How does that make you feel?" YES! Exactly what I wanted to see XD Had he been crying ...

Sounds cool, kind of like a story about the part of the royal family that gets ignored. Otherwise I'd have no idea what it was about. Unless it was suggested ...

Took my breath away, Brad! It had a very nice flow to it, and the voice you used fit right in with the setting of the poem. I could feel ...

I'm just starting multiple POVs in third person... I'm just starting my first novel that is actually in third person. I was freaking out over the POV change in chapter ...

For me, I some how doubt anyone could track me down... And if they did, well, my fault for giving out the info, right? I give out my last name, ...

Bonjour et Bienvenue Mlle Jupiter ;-) You wouldn't believe the like-minded folks you'll find here... If you have any questions about the site, or get lost somewhere feel free to ...

Some peoples celebrated I may not be entirely right on this, but isn't "people" plural already? I'm sure you know better than I, though. I really like the chapters you ...

Dr. Haaser's voice brimmed with a deep calm and patience. Shouldn't this be either "With deep, calm patience" or ... I'm not even sure what else. The "a" kind of ...

has a lot of helpful stuff. (I believe it was also in Writer's Digest 100 sites...) I love, although it isn't a writing site really...

weee It is better now ^_^ I love your portrayal of therapists, even though I'm pretty sure Dr. Haaser is just pretending to be one or...you know...something is going on. ...

What little he could feel was on his face Er. That sounds odd. "He could feel his face" or "What little he could feel was his face" or don't change ...

What snoink said ^_^

The unabridged version of Les Miserables I plan to read that before I die. I just started a lovely, wonderful translation of The Brothers Karamazov . I'm intimidated, to say ...

Okay. So I'm kind of lazy, and I have to read The Good Earth for my English class. I think It'd be easier to just listen to the audio book. ...