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Re: Hurting
Hey there! I have to second the previous review and note that you need serious help with commas! Why not look up some basic comma rules on google? Don't forget ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: Oh darn... Is it yet another new member?!?!
Hello and welcome to the site! If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. I'm not much of a frequent member but I'm hoping to come back more ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: Just give it some time
Hello there! I think your poem had a great message in the end. That's really the core of what you're trying to get across and even though it's a bit ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: Check Your Statistics!
I really like dramatic poetry. O_O That's a really cool feature, Nate!
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Drag Me To Hell
I'm really hoping there are some other members who have seen this movie because I'm dying to discuss it some more! I saw it Sunday night and, boy, did it ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: Wrong.
Hey there! This caught my eye mostly because I'm from St. Louis, haha, and I have no idea who this Bethany Hope girl is. But, to the actual review? The ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: fotografia
As the title alludes to, photography! I had a bit of a photo shoot with my friend yesterday, and a lot of great things came out of it. I'd love ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Rose Picture
I think my favorite thing about this photo has to be the black and white filter. It's not a plain one like a gray scale, it is a lot more ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Love or Hate?
O_o Wow you made the whole thing with photoshop, on your own? I am so impressed... I used photoshop for a bunch of school projects in a dumb business class, ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: The Weight of Suicide
Hello everyone! Thank you a thousand times over for the reviews. They were all greatly appreciated, and for the most part, where criticism was given I agreed with it wholly ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: The Weight of Suicide
[A/N: I'm working towards gathering three of my best poems for a large poetry contest. This, though my longest piece, I believe is also my strongest. Please help me better ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Tack-E
My first comment is about your lack of punctuation but after this sentence I shan't mention it again. ^^ [s]This poem left me slightly confused because I am not certain ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Shellshock Dreams
Well, of course this poem reminded me of All Quiet on the Western Front except there is no bird singing in the death scene... You used some great imagery in ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: one of those conglomerations...
Hello there! I cannot offer my full review at this moment because I shall be leaving for school, so I'll just comment on the things I noticed in one read ...
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: Poetic Poppycock 2009
Even though I'm failing NaPoWriMo.... 19-4-09 Lent my body to the man down the street. He cut to the quick while holding my hand "I'm not the good guy with ...
Apr 19, 2009
