Emerson

It would be worse if Fred was in the lounge and not in his own room so ... I think Fred is OK. Besides its fun to teach him new ...

That is so exciting...I hate when my inbox fills up really quickly. You made my day!

(WARNING: I'm really tired so...this might be bad >_

I really enjoyed this. The atmosphere reminded me of a modern Vile Bodies and I loved the idea of a club scene as morning is coming. It had a good ...

I think it was simply a joke, or perhaps people are misunderstanding. The point Nate is trying to make I believe is that despite what happened, we are going to ...

Merci to everyone, and most of all to WD since you critiqued at request and gave such a lovely response! I'll take in everything everyone said and with any luck ...

How can fish wear glasses if they have no ears...? Still cool!

Bonjour et bienvenue, Welcome to the site ;-) Sorry to say the idea was probably taken even before then...it's natural for writers to want to share, we're vain. If you ...

his eyes glued to the scream A humorous typo. Gosh....Flash backs are so scrumdiddlie-omtious. (I hate trying to spell that word...)

I'd like to make my own sort of statement, just as a way to hopefully keep things clean and say my own opinion, as I do feel very much a ...

Getting out of the house gives one ways to eavesdrop and people watch. Good ways to come up with ideas.

I'm not exactly sure how to start off this critique, so I'll just make a list of what I found to be wrong with it. 1. Topic: The topic was ...

I don't want to say too much: I might get mean. The rhyming was bleh, because it happened so often and without an actual structure. The ending made me feel ...

the whole repetition of "magic eight ball" got annoying, though I have to admit the last stanza was at least cute. I have a couple problems with the poem, though. ...

The repetition of the lines "Our lives are like/old black and white movies." was unbearable and unneeded. The idea presented: that life is stagnant and nothing new happens. Okay, but ...