Emerson

I agree 100% with Xanthan gum. There just wasn't enough to do anything good. I felt nothing from the poem. It was just...said. Also: punctuate! Without punctuation, the poem is ...

First of all: Panda, Panda, shining bright In the stillness of the night, This might sound a bit off but....since when do Panda bears shine? I thought the "message" was ...

Yeah... I'm just here to sing with the choir. This poem does nothing for anyone but you. Poetry can be two things: an expression of emotions, or a way to ...

That is so neato-rific. Vulgar language, as well as netspeak, is not allowed outside of literary works. Ummm....since when is netspeak allowed in literary works? xD I suppose it is ...

There's a point at which labyrinthine story-telling becomes too weighed down by its own complexity that it loses plausibility--that is what's happening on LOST. That, I can entirely agree with. ...

With the rest of the stuff, it's in the list to the left. Gender, age, joined date, posts, and then reviews. So look over there.

Really, Brad? but what was it that they did that was so wrong? I enjoyed it but... I don't analyze things as much as you do, and I'm easily amused ...

I liked the repetition of first letters (the word escapes me at the moment). Those were nice to read. I assume the lack of punctuation and capitalization is purposeful? Though, ...

I'll catch up... I swear.... I will! I haven't even been here a whole year and OH look at my stars yo! Them are blue ones! (What is with the ...

OMG... I just finished watching this and my mind is going to blow! xD I can't wait three or so months for more. It was the f'ing FUTURE!!!!! WTF? See, ...

I love the stars a lot more than the Xs...This is actually a really good way to judge peoples validity in a way, because really if someone is just critiquing ...

herm...hmmmm what to say. I suppose I'll first point out the things I noticed right away: read over it some, you have a few typos. Secondly, you are lacking a ...

Welcome to YWS Caitlin! Good ways to get your creativity to spark is to do writing prompts or something. You can find a lot to help you over in writing ...

Rated PG-13 for Language . Next time, remember to rate your work, or else! Now, to the actual critique... I once had a friend, who all ways told me the ...

Bonjour et Bienvenue, Welcome to YWS. If you have any questions or get lost around the site (as it can be confusing...) or if you need a critique feel free ...