Emerson

Moved to writing tips I can't exactly sit in this argument, I've never had a problem with it...other than Madam Bovary, that whole book was in passive (due to translation, ...

Everyone in Macomb, Illinois thought of the McCall family the ideal family. As the ideal family? They were lower-middle class, and barely made ends meat. Meet, not meat. and for ...

is a the coat closet Word problem? I love the third paragraph in the letter, about confiscating something. The tone seemed real Nabokovish to me, or something. Perhaps it is ...

Ahh I wrote a poem about the same subject! Perhaps, if you would like that, you could read it for a reference point for what Snoink is calling more "sneaky". ...

2/10? Kind of funny.

Wow yeah, you're just like me xD Neopets ftw! That is where I learned everything too, and where I started learning to role play! (for the brief period of time ...

Why yes, I don't remember anything from one, though I did read it.... Mattias kneaded his forehead with his hands *gasp* typo! I didn't like how you used the word ...

It was awkward, and everyone looked like they wanted to do or say something, but none of them did. The cashier screamed. I love how perfect that works. The second ...

I like how you're pulling the threads together. It's going at a great timing. And your switching POVs works nicely. “You’re saying they set out tomurder?” Space! But worst of ...

I love the kids devotion to is mother and how very, very, much he wants to get something for her. Only beauty tells him what to do. I also like ...

which would mean they would to delay the whole operation Missing a word? The black clothing and the bags no doubt arouse the suspicion of the supervisor conveniently stood behind ...

Gutten Tag! Welcome to YWS! You sound like me when I was your age ^_^ I used to be an ultra compie nerd, and I loved graphics design. Now I ...

This was so fun to read ^_^ Like I said on MSN: I think your characters are being gobbled up by description. Or perhaps a better word is smothered? They're ...

Wowa, let me just say your voice totally creeps me out. Makes me feel like something is going to jump out of thin are and attack me O.o I do ...

Abby ran up to the Bronco slowly, careful not to trip. She had to loose the heals a few steps back, so that she wouldn't look like an idiot hobbling ...