Emerson

Ah! Darlings! Thanks you two. Haha Yatta! Your comments made me giggle. I wasn't aware that it was difficult to critique because it was so tragic. @_@ Though you found ...

Ahh your clarification on bees makes it much more beautiful. ^^ It's so hard to catch certain allusions like that, but makes it well worth it. these beast save us ...

Personally, this poem was too long for me to like. Rather than giving me a nervous energy like the characters had, it dragged on and made me feel weighed down. ...

Hello Nadia! I see you posted asking if anyone is going to review. ;-) I'd advise just being patient and waiting. It might take a while, but eventually you'll get ...

I think, since you're doing it in first person, you might be better off doing it in present tense to save on logic - and just do it all in ...

Hey there! I'm not entirely certain I understand your reason for writing this poem - it's about your MC? My first, and minor, suggestion would be to add punctuation. Just ...

I speak English, howdeedo! I've had four years of French thus far, although I would like to think the two weeks I spent in France did more for me than ...

Hello there! and welcome to the Young Writers Society. I can tell you're new because you haven't written any reviews. How you checked out the Welcome Forum, or read the ...

Welcome to YWS ^^ What do you write? If you have any questions, feel free to bother me!

Hello darling! I do not intend to be rude when saying this but if you feel that everything else is just a matter of preference and it doesn't much matter ...

I wrote this a little over a month ago for a poetry contest. I felt like posting something, so here it is. --- My Mother and I We bond over ...

Before I start my review, I have to ask (since you mentioned songs) if these are lyrics or poetry? Since you posted them in the Lyric Poetry section, I'm going ...

Hello and welcome, Sami! It's wonderful to meet you. You'll probably find me in the poetry section, so if you post a poem, look out! I will gently tear it ...

“Dad told me it was the flu or something.” “Didn’t he take you to the doctor, or something?” I asked. They both said "or something" right next to each other. ...

Hello Nadia! How do you do? If you have any questions about the site or need help finding your way around, feel free to message me! What kind of writing ...