Emerson

"I don't know." She shook her head, not taking her eyes off him. "I've never been here before." "Yeah. Right." "Kyle." Very Juliet xD I wish you wouldn't have told ...

Flowery, as in purple prose? Purple prose is icky, but beautiful voices are, as expected, beautiful. If you know the origin of the name, "Lolita," You'll know that she is ...

yay! This was rad. My only problem was the position of people in the scene where Ariel and Sarah Show up. Where is Kyle, exactly? I imagined him looking out ...

Awww it's Sarah... and I got it before it was really "Revealed" in this one. Was this the, "Oooh that's what that is." thing? At least Sarah is sweet with ...

The French flag is red, white, and blue. Americans (me included) are a silly bunch.

Abby stared up at him and scowled, "I was looking for the bathroom!" She was lying. But it didn't matter at this point, she had fallen over a plant and ...

Triggerfinger> I want your hat....can I have it? :-p Nate> You look a little possessed in the last one, the white of your eyes showing and all. Jack> I still ...

All I have to say Ofour, is a poem never goes well when you must explain it ;-) "This poem is about confusion, so don't feel sad if you get ...

Abby waited until she heard the foot steps fade, and doors close shut. Everything had gone back to sleep mode. She waited a few more minutes, hoping they'd be asleep. ...

This one looks cute, except for the thing riding the pig....

That's kind of a silly thing to ask, doesn't everyone internally edit there thoughts? Grammatically, at the least. But when speaking of things , as you must be, Rosen. But...That ...

Hah, can you switch places and no one notices, too? :-p

Are they...twins? Creepy. Bonne Anniversaire, in any case.

I liked it, but the sentence structures, and line structures for that matter, really bothered me. They were jumpy, and didn't flow, and some of the sentences felt lumpy, kind ...

Black? Blacks a nice color. Though dark. Hmmm...Fuchsia sounds cute. what about mini monkey faces? :-p