Emerson

Such positive remarks!! You really like Fitzgerald, yeah? I'm with you (and the rest of the writing world) quitting isn't an option. I may go whole months without writing and ...

Very cute! Winnie the Pooh is the best character ever, and you captured him wonderfully =D

The animations are very cool! Much cooler than anything I could do.

The last one is very good. The angel you took it at is really nice!

The self portrait was my favorite. You captured everything within you, very nice!

The Leaves, the color in that one was superb, and the Key picture is beautiful . Those were my favorite. Very nice Fandilocks ^_^

I love how your images seem very every day, there is nothing "special" to them, and that very quality makes them beautiful. There is nothing that makes them look overly ...

This poem was OK, but I couldn't really relate to it. Try better word choice, and adding some imagery would really help it. Paint us a picture, and give us ...

This had no punctuation, but the biggest problem was that the grammar is just not there. I think kitty covered most of this. This poem needs some help. First person ...

It's working now. *shock* It seems to fade in and out. I didn't expect it to work so I didn't even use it, then I did and I was very ...

Kind of... drab? Very obvious, but it has no beauty into it. Touch of fire, fire burns, it hurts, ow. :lol: Maybe something more...imagery filled. In the Footlights

The repetition was annoying. You gave us a poem, but not much to it. I can't entirely grasp what is even going on in it.. But that might just be ...

[s]Who wants to save a life? I do.[/s] Amongst dirty roads and dusty atmosphere, a woman exhales, inhales, deeper, slower, her blood trails across her legs, the river runs dry. ...

Punctuate. Please. Poetry & Punctuation This poem was really stuck in its self. Pull it out of its self, and rewrite it. In other words: make us feel something, pay ...

It was...curious. You should capitalize looks quiet without it. (And does that make sense?) This was a captured moment of a very brief and brisk thing. The imagery was minimal ...