Emerson

Okay.. I know I didn't skip a chapter, but this makes no sense. She just fired her lawyer, and now she is her own lawyer....? Logic is going crazy again, ...

the sun had now set, but looking at Tammy's face you wouldn't know. . Well,yes, because you can't see the sun being gone in Tammy's face...? This didn't make much ...

Tres bien mlle JC . I only have one question: why was Tammy going to see Jaime to begin with? Was it to ask again if she would speak? Because ...

I'm the niceness inside of her. The complete and absolute selflessness. I also resemble the cute guy from The Dreamers - Clive Well, she accidentally heard what would become my ...

I think of a nuclear power plant melt down, like Chernobyl. or three mile island. I also think of mental "meltdowns" although I call those break downs.... Deep in Mud

Makes me think of a cat... but nothing really. Speakeasy

Her heart speed sped, is the past tense of 'to speed' so... sped. It's sweet to see the nurse being nicer to her. I'm having a problem with your chapters: ...

Her once silky [comma] ink black hair add a hyphen between "ink" and "black" ig: ink-black. She didn't meet her mom on the way out of the house, it was ...

She was mad, upset, sad, and every emotion in between. Ah, the wonder of telling emotion. Can I quote from a book I'm currently reading...? How does [so-and-so] succeed in ...

I wish the right answer were that easy to find, your subject [answer] is singular where your verb [were] is plural. Fix. This was an OK chapter. Her big speech ...

Er. oops. Ignore that! I thought I had one, then I couldn't remember it? I must have forgotten to delete that....hee hee. Silly me!

I don't know, perhaps my local library hates me ? There is one library there who treats me poorly :-P They sell books on occasion, for very cheep, I love ...

Moved to Fiction Tips and Discussion It isn't so much that I can't read while I'm writing, it is that my time is taken up by one, or the other. ...

If you can count slightly mumbling along to the German verses "knowing the song" I can sing Du Hast and many other rammstein songs :-P

Writing does not guarantee a stable career and I excel in other subjects True! But I love to write/read, and guess what I want to do? I'm going to get ...