Emerson

Hello there! This poem has a very heavy topic to it, but what you've done with it, it only touches the surface. You cover sadness, love, cutting, bullying. So there's ...

Hi darling! She found herself on a far western shore, with the ocean before her; like a giant that pretends to slumber, until it wishes to ravish the town. So ...

Hi there! I'm not much familiar with the villanelle but I'm assuming that's why there's the repetition and all? Small typo: "And you that came to ope the door." Open, ...

Hello there Crescent! First I'll talk about what I liked because that's always nice. :) You have some very interesting and unique lines here, such as, "Lies and slander mark ...

Hey there! I'm not sure I could judge whether you're a good enough writer to be well published and all that off of just a few paragraphs. Writing is a ...

This is the one year where I didn't know what I was writing by July, and I haven't spent [all] of September planning. I only sort of figured out what ...

Oooo I like this new thingy madooble, and the fact that the ratio will slowly go up. :D Great decision Nate et al! (Also, I'm proud. This is my first ...

Weee YWS is marked to come back my first day of school. :) That balances out the scary.

First impression: the way one fakes happiness, or any other emotion, just to silence all the annoyingness around them as a result of the opposing emotion. The white flag is ...

Hm. Ugh, well I just wrote you a review and then somehow the tab decided to close itself. I'm rather angry at that! I like the unique direction you took ...

Er, Hallo! Ich kann Deutsch sprechen aber nicht so gut, ein Bischen... I've had three years of German and I'm more-or-less terrible at it, but I would love to try ...

A desire he that burned him for two years Typo of some kind here. The one she gave her heart to[s]o[/s]. The first problem this poem his has is that ...

Hello love! This isn't really the place where you post poems for review, so if you would, PM a moderator, someone in green, and tell them you need this thread ...

I have to admit I'm kind of bothered by the fact that there are two stories in one thread, only because my brain gets upset about mental organization like this, ...

Nothing. :( [Not entirely true. XD I'm going to be working on writing articles this week, but real projects? Nope.]