Emerson

I like the imagery... I haven't really read over what everyone else has said. (I see some stanza killing went on?) The imagery is really nice, the only problem I ...

Not too bad. I should be rejoicing with her though, shouldn't I? Eleven, aren't there twelve...? The ending was slightly melodramatic. "Yay! but....no... it's still sad. because, it is." But ...

This is touching ;-) I like the... "movement" of it. Does that make sense? Perhaps no...

This was really short... lol. On another note, I'm finally reading in order =D

It's good. But the feelings are played low. Amber a few chapters ago totally ditched her friend, and now at the "reunion" it's kind of light. Otherwise, it was good ...

Just leaving her behind like that was the hardest thing I’ve ever had to do. It was, really? Because when I read it, it looked pretty easy... Up the emotions, ...

I read 32still first, this makes more sense. I hate being confused Oo But this chapter was good, and I'll tell you exactly why: you asked tammy a question, and ...

You know [from what I saw, lol] you have two 32 chapters? But seeing as I'm reading everything out of order anyway I'm just ignoring how it makes sense and ...

Can you forgive my immense stupidity? Ignore anything I said previously about it "not making sense". And, so you know, this stuff in between the not cool court scenes spices ...

Yes, I'm reading wrong. You should seriously consider using normal chapters, in you know...numerical order.

To one side of the tall, raised desk stood a police officer a bailiff. Not a police officer. Every time he got divorced... If [from what I have read] Jamie's ...

In entire agreement with Whence. It lacked emotions/I felt nothing. Poems about emotions suck, because you have to be really good to write a really good poem about them... The ...

Okay... 1) if she just asks Tammy to come back [we don't know why she fired her in the first place, and why she brought her back. We lost both ...

hmm... Making court scenes readably enjoyable is almost impossible. I just finish Dostoevsky's amazing novel, The Brothers Karamazov which I highly suggest you read before you die. They had a ...

People I don't know, some caring, some hoping to see another murdering teen go to jail. Not a complete sentence. vowing to to cry. not to cry? I have to ...