Emerson

Hah, that's like a friend I had who tried to say God was imperfect, because humans were made in his image, and humans are imperfect. Basically: Don't take the bible ...

The last line seems kind of useless. The poem is cute for imagery, but a little childish and nothing beyond that. Not really a poem, IMO, although it does have ...

O.o Well... That doesn't mean the snake is the devil? Could simply be a demon in animal form. (Referencing what Sureal said about animals...)

Give all the glory to God and none to the real creator. ...Satan? That confuses me... In honesty, I take the bible with a grain of salt, seeing it more ...

You know really I'm wondering why you even believe in God... For someone to have this many questions it seems more like you are trying to uproot other's beliefs rather ...

Honestly, I skimmed through what you gave us ^^' it was too worded for me to look over anything but the basic facts. Well, now, you could just believe in ...

Oh dear. I won't correct grammar for the sake of it... Any poem about cutting is (usually) not done well.. It's one of those topics that has been so dried ...

bonjour et bienvenue Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or find you are getting lost on the site, feel free to PM me. Or if you need a ...

Oy, Imp dear. You blow me away with everything you do. I could visualize the church... marvelous. I love Gregorian chants as well, so " sanctus, sanctus spills" worked wonders. ...

Kitty caught the typos... You seriously need to punctuate, btw. Poetry & Punctuation . Reminded me a lot of the song Hell is for Children . Doesn't really make for ...

Yes, of course you can =D We don't censor work, we just rate it.

Awesome pictures as always! Though, I really love your photographs with people more. These look actionless, but they do a good job at showing the beauty of Vancouver buildings ;-)

Rating changed to R for content and language... I placed my cold yet clammy hand on my forehead. cold yet clammy doesn't work. Clammy is cold... “Fuck! You look white!” ...

Hey again =) I'm going to be nit picky, because you're good enough to get even better ^_~ She followed the woman’s brisk nod down an unfamiliar hallway until she ...

Broken sword> Very, very cool Someone already guessed, but, write me, middle in the first picture? It looks like you.