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Re: Suggestions for Summer Reading
The Brothers Karamazov by Fyodor Dostoevsky, but be sure it is a good translation, or you will die. It's long, but you have all summer, right? And it is the ...
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: Blind Love : rewrite
When Madame told her that, she blew it off. She just wasn’t confident in my ability to handle myself. What did she know? She was a city girl, lost in ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
FEMA! I want to say that "Fem-uh" rather than "fee-muh" xD Smexy baby, Smexy. Keep up the steamy poses! =O
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: ZOHMIGOSH JACK!
Happy birthday =P This was somewhat late... oh well. Everyone! Tell Jack happy birthday or I will cannibalize you!
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Suzanne's Writerly Rambles [4 March 2008]
UPDATE 6/19/07 I just wrote the coolest short story I could have possibly ever done: Módlmy Się . Seeing as this may turn into something really good [if it isn't ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Confused on Sentence Structure
A. You did A correct. "Child" is a general term. "girl" is more specific. The latter choice, no, because you're becoming more general, and not specific. That is something you'd ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: i'm new...
Bonjour et Bienvenue! Willkommen! Your name is very... full of letters! You need a nickname. As you seem confused, if you have any more specific questions [I could just start ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
5/10 Why can't we indulge? :lol:
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Have You Ever been to the Beach?
This is cute... The rhyme scheme is very simple, stuff everyone could think up. The poem is also very simple, but there is something about it that still works. (I ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: River of Time
You know, a river of time as a metaphor has only worked for me in Sidhartha . This poem was dry. I felt nothing. It just listed stuff about "the ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Pages of Our Lives
You should consider taking a second look at your punctuation, and not ending every line in a common. Poetry & Punctuation . You started out with the cliché "life is ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
8/10 Spelling is cool, but Pirates are better than ninjas.
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: What's Your Religion?
I'm religious, but I prefer to believe in God, pray, and go to church without an actual religion tied to it. They're too... messy? Each one has their own rules ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: The Untamed Acre
I don't have much to say on these. Should the be taken as a whole, or on their own? I. should be more punctuated, don't you think? The words felt ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: The Chair of Wind & Darkness: Draft Two [1-4]: Closed
Okay so... I am posting these :-P I'm really glad you can read my hand writing xD You probably know it well by now... I loved it! If you can ...
Jun 19, 2007
