Emerson

I liked this, and I'd really like to see it worked out better because I think I'd enjoy it, I just have some questions and a few pointers. Is this ...

Moved to Randomness for the sake of...purposelessness Like everyone else said, there is one =)

Abby grunted. "You don't trust me with anything, do you? What do you expect from a homeless person!?" She really didn't care - she was just scared. Her hands were ...

Oh, gosh Fabes... Even these photos without people are just stunning. I loved the twisting road ever since I saw it in your blog, seeing it was the others makes ...

I was told it never snowed in Misery, but lovers tend to lie.

Kit, yay! you posted. My only word: space more, makes it easier. I'll be printing this tonight/tomorrow and editing. Heres to hoping you can read my hand writing...

I think the line breaks didn't go over so well. In the first stanza they did but in the third it felt jumpy. The now-and-then-but-not-always-rhyme-scheme bothers me... =/ This poem ...

I got infected by Cali's El Jay making habit. Speakeasy has an El jay now! SPEAKEASY:

Ooo... I'll need to run over to eljay in that case. Your writing is so yummylicious.

Took a wee bit of research on my part. [Menelaus] I liked the play on the quote, "We'll always have Paris." You Bogart fan ;-) It ended too abruptly, IMO, ...

Oh dear... I just felt like I read erotica in poetry form X_X I suppose it is good but... *dies* That's like reading really graphic Rammstein lyrics, without having to ...

Very... depressing to say the least. I'm glad it didn't end up like most poems, I thought you were just praising the goodness of life or something. I think this ...

Willkommen JFJ ;-) If you have any questions about the site or need help finding your way around feel free to PM me and I'll do what I can ^_^ ...

10/10 My characters are people... they're real! This is really...weird.

Hey, It was way too introspective for me, but I have this large distaste for nearly all exposition. It's so nasty, action pausing, and bleck. But, the problem you have ...