Emerson

10/10, because Mrvica is awesome ^_^

Bonjour et bienvenue =D Seems we have already met? In any case, welcome to the site ^_^ If you have any questions, or find yourself lost wandering around the site, ...

This poem really didn't do anything for me. It didn't navel gaze, and there were emotions, but they didn't come out, and I didn't feel anything. You listed stuff, just ...

I liked this. I liked how it sunk at the end, because up until then, it was sweet, and though I don't like the memories much now, I was reminded ...

Like Nic said, the repetition kind of shot and killed that stanza. I've always enjoyed poems that tell stories, but they have to be done in a certain manner for ...

You know, you mentioned this poem to me the other day, and I didn't know whether I had said anything on it or not. Guess not. I read Snoinks adjective ...

Thanks all. I'm glad the responses vary. I don't think it is my best poem, but I think it is one of my most liked by me. Because it is ...

I enjoyed this. But I'm not entirely sure what to say. I'm trying to pick apart the meaning behind it. But, I fail at crap like that sometimes. Beautiful, as ...

Seems cliché. A lot of things battle for the world. Why should I care about this one? Perhaps if it was... "Battle for the world's water supply" or something, because ...

Well, rap and country aren't the only other two types of music out there. What about classical? Jazz? Blues? Orcestral? I don't know what "The mommas and the pappas" are... ...

It was okay. You had some good imagery, but when I think beach, I think salty fish smells. I smelt nothing... I've read so many poems about beaches, I can't ...

Sounds kind of... cheesy? A little too blunt for my taste. Perhaps it is a humorous YA. Or a fanific, or a satire on the horror/fantasy genre? Horror + fantasy ...

ooo! I read the transition scenes, and they seemed really out of place to me. But I have a question: is there more? Because, really, if your novel is like ...

You should consider opening up your field of music. I am a heart throb for heavy German music, but I also love Gregorian chants, and some softer techno like Enigma. ...

“Honey… are you sure you want to go?” “Yes, I ar’dy told you!” The [s]unknowingly[/s] adorable girl had her jaw stuck out [s]furiously[/s]; [comma, d00d, not semicolon] the perfect measure