Emerson

Thanks Crysi ^_^ I wrote my first entry, I don't think it's so bad... He'll probably love it. So far the only problem I have is not writing POV or ...

So, I'm starting my summer reading for my next years class, AP American Lit. and I'm reading over the things we should say, and I'm "shaking in my boots". I ...

Stars are fun! I almost have five red ones ^_^ ... almost. It'll be a while =/ Congrats ;-)

I had never heard the phrase "too wordy" in criticism of a work of literature. To me this is an absurd idea, and those who use it while daring to ...

I'll reread it in a bit, and edit this post... I guess I've always kind-of known it would become like this, but really it's just because I have no idea ...

I had a problem with some of the punctuation (S4, L2, period?) and sometimes the rhyming went weird (mori/I?) and the rhythm went off (I didn't count it though, it ...

*giggles* Thanks guys. I really would like to improve this though. Where does the rhyming seem forced? It might come off that way due to the rhythm. I do know ...

This was Ok. It could have been better. Jaime at a party? Yeah, you could have done a lot more to give this conflict. I liked the school conflict, but ...

"at stead" doesn't make sense to me. Also I read it exempting the parts in brackets, and it made less sense. I use brackets only when something can be taken ...

This has a sing-song feel to it, so when you broke rhythm it sounded bad. Also, repeating that verse was useless. This is kind of an over used topic, but ...

A poem by Mad! I forgot how much I enjoyed you. I expected this to be longer.... Pearly tears course down her face And fine hair flaunts across her back. ...

I have a suggestion! Buy and read this book: Writing Fiction . This book taught me how to become a writer, although, there is still a lot of uphill work ...

This is odd. Where is this going? Why is she "in between"? Better yet - why should I care? Remember, beginnings need to catch the reader, make them ask questions. ...

Okay, so, I got bored. I hadn't intended to write a poem like this, but it happened. So...Yeah. Enjoy! Lunch Time He liked to eat the ones he loved; He ...

8/10, pianos rule! Bechak: Come on? He oozes Croat hotness. (Weird way to use the verb 'ooze'.)