Emerson

ohmigoodness *hugs YWS* it's back!

That we should all get together and do this for you Jamie. Comma before Jamie, direct address. This certainly changes things, doesn't it? It foreshadows her dads home coming, and ...

This works a lot better. [I finally got around to reading the rewrite, heh.] There isn't really any conflict but it is a lot better than Jaime just sitting around ...

I believe Nate recently posted some things on plagiarism in the Info Desk. Sort of a contract or something, I forget exactly what. I don't worry about plagiarism. It's never ...

Yeah... I don't think it would make much sense for anyone outside of the US to celebrate it. Although, cinco de mayo is celebrated in many places, and that is ...

I think it looks very cool. Really, really neat. Author says it looks scribbly, but it lends to the style, if it was more straight edged and perfect, it wouldn't ...

Me at my sister's wedding. I edited the photo so it doesn't look as bad as it was xD It was very blurry and the color was odd. I also ...

ooo. If I haven't joined this yet, I have to. And, for the record: Sam is amazing. 1. Twilight Yes, you love it. Yes, I did enjoy it. But did ...

Abby lunged toward the window to get a better view. "Fuck... You know he's walking off, don't you?" She looked at Mev, and the bleeding chick. "He's leaving. He's just ...

This is odd... It's well written, but for me way too vague to be enjoyed. It was rambling to too great of an extent for me to enjoy, you know? ...

I love the second one, the one you're using for your avatar. Very pretty, the lighting is very nice too. You should consider getting a better photo editor =] I'm ...

Moved to Fantasy Fiction

Hmm... I hate to say, "no" but no. First of all, don't just write in long lines like that. Poetry should be put in verse, and sure you can have ...

Read over it, you have some typos. I think you should also consider cleaning up the punctuation, or doing something. All the period make it seem clunky. Poems like this ...

Read the first part, so far. Some grammar was off (I think the above caught it.) But you should still consider reading through it yourself and trying to catch these ...