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Re: NaPo and/or SF?
April. *shivers* I wish I was doing NaPo since I haven't written poetry since May 2009. @_@ However, I get initiated into my sorority April 10 and until then, I'm ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Has anyones work here been published?
I had a short story published in the first YWS Lit journal, and though it's not actual publication, I've had two short plays I wrote produced! That was pretty awesome. ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: I'm New. Lets have a party
Hey there and welcome to the YWS! What kind of stories do you write? Don't bash American too much, we have a lot of those here, including me! :P all ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Ooh, a question on apostrophes.
How to you know whether there is one or two: context. I would assume so anyway. But in both cases they're names of businesses so the apostrophe might actually be ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Friends or Followers?
I completely forgot we had a newsfeed on here. I guess that was part of the old YWS system? The things I forget! Jeez. So this sounds like a fabulous ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Not sure what this is called yet
Hi there! This might seem silly, but the fact that this poem doesn't have a title is a big indication that the poem itself needs a lot more work on ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: A is For
I am more than happy to be here, reading one of your poems! And aren't I satisfied. This is a beautiful artwork, as you always give. As the others said, ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: sadness
Hello there! It looks like you haven't made any reviews yet. Not to entirely get on your case, but you should review some stuff! It's fairly easy, and it's only ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: I Have A Question
Hey there! I have to agree with Megan, this seems more like a rap song, but not because you shorten the words, like "cuz" (anyone can do anything in poetry, ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Headless Wisdom
So I positively love the irony in headless wisdom, being that the brain is in the head and so all intelligence is considered to be in the head... put you ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Pain
Hi there! I really like that you use the idea of a tornado to represent your speakers emotions. It's real unique, and angry, and a great visual cue for the ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Like the snow
Hey there! Being that I'm still in the middle of getting over a rough breakup, I can really relate to this poem. It's a real toughy, that's for sure. What ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Hello, everyone
Hello and welcome to the YWS! I would tell you that if you have any questions about how to find your away around the site, PM me, but honestly, even ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: The Obscured (Scene 1)
Hiya there! So since this says "scene 1" I'm going to assume this is the beginning of the movie, or TV show, or whatever it is intended to be. Like ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Oh High Plains Drifter *Edited*
The imagery in this poem is epic. End of sentence. Major props for that. I love, love the first stanza. It flows wonderfully and makes me think of something Whitman ...
Mar 15, 2010
