Emerson

do you think there's going to have to be a montly fee? I don't think nate would ever do that to us :lol: And - we seem to be playing ...

Fabien, you are so amazing.. Your photography is always superb. You should go professional =]

Improvement to the max ^_^ Q! "Usees"? Is this a reference to omniscient... ness? or what ever. "All seeing."

Er, uh. Childish? Yes. That's the best fitting word. If you wanted for something more serious [or, jokingly serious] give it a rhythm, that'll put it more into place. Then ...

You used a very simple rhyme theme, which Fand once called Bubblegum rhyming, because its so simple. Any one could come up with those rhymes. You have no rhythm, either ...

My father believes that they will be looking for parents to sue. And I hope so.

I find the sheet being a character mystifying, and as par, I'm somewhat confused :lol: But some parts I understood, and enjoyed. You have some errors - but you're a ...

Fire heavily damages Fox Elementary By Bill Bryan ST. LOUIS POST-DISPATCH 07/02/2007 ARNOLD — Fireworks gone awry were responsible for a fire early Sunday that could reach $1 million in ...

I'm not entirely sure what to say of this poem. It didn't have a specific structure, or scheme of any kind, and what ever you were writing about I couldn't ...

Oh, vampires. My first love... I actually wrote a vampire novel for my NaNoWriMo '06. I'm still unsure whether I'll ever edit it. You admitted the beginning was a lot ...

I disagree with some of these... And don't start a sentance with a conjugation. This is actually a rule that is taught to children in school to teach them to ...

Bonjour et bienvenue ;-) Welcome to YWS! You'll find this is a great place to make friends, and to get help. What is your ministory about? If you need any ...

Honestly, I can't make any sense of it. I think it should be something good, it does sound poetic but... I get confused by the first line, think of a ...

UPDATE 7/5/07 I sent Módlmy Się into two magazines today. I'm still looking for more to send into, in case I get rejected. I have found three others, all of ...

*hugs YWS* I'm really proud of all us addicts out there =] I didn't die! haha.