Emerson

How can you ask me this? I'm so picky over my books! Hardbacks usually irritate me, because I end up ruining/loosing/throwing away the jackets. Then they're not as cool. I ...

Anywhere but backwards. - Rosen ...Going? I'm not going anywhere, I'm just sitting. Should I be going somewhere. Are you telling me I should leave? - Vadoma This is deeper ...

I don't remember receiving gifts. None that were wrapped, anyway. - Rosen ...In-di-scri-mi-net-ly? That is a really big word. I really... I'm sorry... I have no idea what you are ...

Her dad was the president of the United States so of course she was treated like a Queen and she wasn’t going to disapprove of the royal service. Telling. It's ...

Chandni comment on some punctuation. I certainly think you could go through and clean up the punctuation, at least a bit. There didn't seem much in it, I didn't feel ...

UPDATE 7/7/07 I just got my reply from Shimmer . I'm actually no that depressed! Thank you for allowing us to consider "Módlmy Się" for publication in Shimmer, but I'm ...

I liked it, but sometimes the rhyming felt off, I think because the rhyming is force/strict and then the rhythm sometimes changes and it just kills the poem. I can't ...

Knock of the critique arguing, keep on topic. Do it through PMs if you're that upset. Anymore and I might lock the thread.

I moved forward most of everything.. or at least, some I like, though the first two are just old ones. Old Time Fishes Fleur I like the one with the ...

*detonates C-4* =/ That isn't very nice.

Shut up ed. *smacks* They're Plaques.

I think those are called plaques. Yes, I looked up the definition. Plaque is the word. A flat plate, slab, or disk that is ornamented or engraved for mounting, as ...

Fabie, what should I be discussing...? We don't have televisions in our rooms, only in the living room. I rarely watch TV unless there is something specific I plan to ...

This poem does need to show a lot more emotion, and in places the rhyming is really forced. A date is a date. Ill never be late. Or make you ...

The kh picture looks really good, but the only thing I think looks a little odd is the heart thing at top. I looked at the larger version, but still ...