Emerson

You're young, so you're new to poetry. This doesn't really give me anything. I suggest you read poetry, and books on poetry. Read poems on the site and look at ...

I'm sure Colly said a lot of marvelous things. Listen to her, lol. The title strikes me odd. Save Our Ship. But I think you chose it for the alliterations ...

Wiggy... we live five minutes from each other XD For some reason, I don't think that is that weird, since you know, Hannibal is a big tourist attraction... sort of. ...

I haven't read over Colly's critique, but she is brilliant and I'm sure she gave a lot of good advice. I liked this, but it seemed lacking. It was pretty, ...

[Though on a slightly more serious note - I think there's a pre-thirteen limit on the registration...?] You can send in parent permission forms, although whether he/she did this I ...

I think the elephant "encroached" into human territory... even if it was elephant territory to start with. XD

5/10 It's cool, but the graphics look pixily, weird. Not crisp.

Whence critiqued... I didn't read it, but hey, he says good things. Listen to him. As for what I have to say! [I also say good things.] They rhyming was ...

Welcome to yws ^_^ If you have any questions you can ask me ;-)

zomg, now we have two kitties... *feels lost* Bienvenue, in any case ;-) If you need help finding your way around the site of have a question feel free to ...

Bienvenue! If you need any help finding your way around the site feel free to ask me ^_~ Enjoy.

Jack - you are SO pretty! *strokes hair* and I still love your hair. So, like I promised, pictures from the vaca. I have a lot more, but these are ...

Ouch.

Hahaha, I saw about that...

I'm going to skip all the grammar, capitalization, punctuation, etc. Everyone else has told you you need to fix that ^_~ But I'll probably end up repeating Snoink, only with ...