Emerson

Vous êtes le voyager? Bienvenue, Voyager ^_^ If you find yourself getting lost or needing help of some kind, feel free to PM me and I'll help you out. Enjoy ...

Ah - People enjoy this ^_^ I'm glad. You know Stilltyping, thank you for saying that. Maybe I will read over this and put some effort into cleaning it up ...

No, Adams already has. Come on, he's amazing. He knew pink floyd AND monty python. He is cool.

I like the message behind the poem but I feel like it is a message that has been told in so many different ways, and so many times, that it ...

I don't think I have a fantasy life. Yes, I do dream, but I'm a cynic as well. - Rosen Maybe it is my own phobias. I'm horrified of so ...

Punctuate, please? Poetry & Punctuation Try writing the poem so that I can relate and feel what you feel. Also, write about an actual event. Sometimes you can write about ...

Yes, there is also such thing as external conflict. And as for the choice being stupid, it doesn't have to be stupid, there just has to be someone else who ...

“Only losers suck their thumbs,” he teased. since this is a memory... yes? I think you should say "He had teased" because I thought this was actually part of the ...

I love both pictures. I'm a very big Alice and Wonderland fan (though, er, I haven't read the books yet. But I do love the animated disney film). I think ...

=/ him walking into a pole is funnier. And looks realer

Is it? Nope, I'm not.

East of Eden by Steinbeck. :roll:

The punctuation feels really odd, and the fact that the lines are so short makes it really jumpy, it just doesn't flow. At the end, I'm left thinking, "What was ...

I've always thought it curious the way one could still love the man who abuses you, it's such a contradicting feeling. Your poems always leave room for me wanting more. ...

This is spaced oddly, you can keep all the lines together [without space between them] and it is still correct. Interesting topic, it comes off beautifully, but there isn't much ...