Emerson

Well, tilted it and darkened it some, to bring out the shadows and such. I thought it looked better. Took a while for me to figure out how to do ...

Minnow just makes me think of a skinny kid ^^' I almost always write with a guy as the main character. I seem to be unable to help it. Perhaps ...

Or perhaps everyone else is just getting older? It does feel odd... hmm. Bienvenue Miriam! If you have any questions or need help around the site feel free to PM ...

I could edit it so that the picture is straighter [I was probably standing crooked...] would it look nicer like that?

So, we all agree that the flower picture isn't good. I agree! That's settled...

I've never really been into ska, and in fact I've only heard of the genre a few times here or there, and never really heard and of the bands that ...

I didn't read it but just some notes: Please, space out your paragraphs to make it easier to read. And, you may not want to post all of this at ...

So, it's more free verse than I normally am. I'm not sure that the line it ends on works - Dream_deep suggested I lengthen it, so the whole lost stanza ...

Ah, so now I can expand my thoughts! It's cute, and does work well as poetry. I always ask for more than a story in poetry, and then when I ...

I like complex rhyme schemes... Its: ABABCCDDD and the last line is repeated in every stanza. Forgive me? I hadn't picked up on the rather complex rhyme scheme. I'm used ...

The emotions worked in this ^_~ Her eyes filled with hate. Hate from everything that she had ever gone through with Richard, and with her family. At that moment, every ...

Ah, it wasn't so bad ^_^ And I do not recognize the last stanza as being from anywhere. It read beautifully. Really the only complaint I can make is that ...

Maybe death will be happy Maybe death will feel sad Maybe death will feel crappy Maybe death will get mad Maybe he’ll be overjoyed Maybe he’ll get annoyed Maybe death ...

Hm. I started reading it, but then I couldn't finish it :roll: I'm so difficult. Punctuate it. Usually I can read and make it through the lack of punctuation, but ...

Oo I feel somewhat frightened.