Emerson

Mehr, I'm just picky with poetry! I had a feeling it was religious - vicious Crysi might not know it but I AM religious :-p But as a poem, I ...

Bonjour Sarah, If you have any questions about the site, I'm sure RED will be able to help you, but if you need extra help on how to find your ...

It flows. But what is "God-breathed"? I didn't really like it. I didn't get nice imagery, or a feeling. I couldn't relate. It wasn't about something concrete, and even then, ...

I had been so long without light of any form that I no longer died at night. There was no need, no use to protect me from the sky. This ...

Some grammar issues here and there, you could catch them on a read through I'm sure. So, why did she pass out? Did she hyperventilate? I don't know, I've never ...

A code... what? XD Hm, wasn't so bad. Though I already know they'll probably go, "Oh, oh, why were you in the room? You did it to him!" Or maybe ...

Certainly didn't make me feel like I had just read an erotica... If I am correct in guessing what you were talking about at the beginning? You do some repetition ...

10/10! The goat looks so awesomely cute! ^_^

Dai, Caro vero. Very smart of you to get back on my good side, Clau. Para tutti la famiglia, no? I wish I knew Italiano . Though, it is on ...

Never like Romeo and Juliet , but most of my life is that way, yes. - Rosen No, I usually avoided romances anyway... I seem to have fallen in love ...

You guys are cute XD This will be interesting.

hee hee, cany mountain. Bienvenue, mari de Mel. If you need help around the site or something, you can PM me. it's... odd seeing older people show up here. Hm. ...

...What word? That's... that's a really big word. - Vadoma If something doesn't function, is dysfunctional, it doesn't work, and should be fixed. I'm not sure how to describe it, ...

I don't normally read fanfiction, but as far as I know, even fan fiction should have a well structured plot so... instead of having Luke just rant and cry and ...

Sounds too much like a romance story. And it just has no spice to it, I might stare at it for a few minutes and try to guess what it ...