Emerson

Anything in red is an addition. “The question is,” Director Mark Clevenger said comma pacing at the head of the conference table, tie loosened and sleeves rolled up passed thick ...

Bonjour Sarah! Oh, I love your avatar, dear ^_~ Well, since you said you aren't sure how this works, you probably have questions or need help with something. If you ...

hmmm YA ish. It isn't very specific, in fact it is really vague so it could be about anything. I imagine someone falling. Don't Panic

I paused to catch my breath, at the speed she was going, she was long gone by now. This sentence is weird. I left the crumpled papers next to my ...

haha. Sadly, though, I've never read Austen sooo. I wouldn't have picked up on it either. But it is still pretty funny. Shows you how much they pay attention.

I would nit pick this and fix all your spelling errors and grammar problems and all, but since I have a problem with the whole section, I won't. All of ...

This is creepy. Family members of two of the three families who have fallen victim to cell phone stalking have spoken out about their nightmare, saying police near their home ...

“I know you can do better than this! Strike me!” A man exclaims forcefully as his hands move smoothly, effortlessly over a young woman’s strikes, manipulating them to his will. ...

*squee* Wow. That was beautiful. I kind of wish it had more meaning behind it, or maybe it doesn't and I just don't see it? I'll have to sit and ...

Oh, this was beautiful. I have found an example where lack of capitalization works! I really can't think of anything else to say... perhaps tomorrow I'll have more to say ...

oh, brad liked the poem? Props for Marenka! I really liked it, but honestly I didn't know and wasn't sure it was about abuse until the little message =/ How ...

I like the ideas behind it, but it seems jumpy. Although, that fits with the ideas doesn't it? And you seem to really like italics ^_~ As always I think ...

Italicizing the first line of each stanza makes the act of italicizing less meaningful, imo. I'm feeling terribly lazy tonight, so these are all short :lol: if you want me ...

Gah, I can't help but love the poem, and agree with everyone else. It had it's beauty to it, but to me I felt like it was lacking more behind ...

I think it needs more punctuation... Anyway, this seems like a mildly preachy poem, and preachy poems make me squeal inside and freak out. But the idea of slowing down ...