Emerson

[spoiler]test[/spoiler] We had one of these on another forum I was at, only it had a button that said "Spoiler".

So. New to poetry? Take it out of italics and punctuate it ( Poetry & Punctuation ). This was real Navel Gazing . I couldn't feel anything, and you were ...

I think you should use quotations when she speaks, in one of my 'story' poems, my characters speak, and I use quotations. It helps people understand better, and we're used ...

I agree, lots of telling! And I would say more, but it seems wordy-ish and so my brain freaks out and doesn't comprehend it well x_x you'll have to forgive ...

Meaning: 2 Essential, illusory. 7 Tantalizes, Captivates, Absconds. 9 It is insensibly sought. 7 The red numbers next to each line represent syllable count. Here is a description of a ...

Interesting rhyme scheme ^_~ I didn't like it very much, and I can't say much. It was like a story with lots and lots and lots of introspection put in ...

I really did enjoy this ^_^ But I just have some nit picks: which I [s]blue[/s] blew all on beer When you use the dashes, things get awkward. And you ...

I think the idea was good but I think it was poorly conducted. It just didn't work for me, but I'm not sure why. Maybe it's the way the stanzas ...

I didn't like it much... the rhyme scheme may be right and correct but I don't think it was, and I looked at it and tried to figure it out, ...

ooer, Fand beat me to it. Though, for once, I'm not sure I completely agree? I do have to say, listen to her closely. Everything she says is like gold ...

hahaha, you make me sound like a slave driving moderator of magical status XD How creative of you! Really though, I'm not that demanding... sometimes. Ack, I'm half tempted to ...

I prefer the first title, simply because Ali's obsessions with the hawk thing annoys me xD [you'll see that comment in the critique.] I've sent in one story so far, ...

If they get one lock on you, you are mort, to use an American euphemism. American euphemism...? But mort is French @_@ I'm confused! glowing redly. oh, ew, just say, ...

I managed to sit still today, for a while to o . It 's just a matter of scratching them. This was cute, but in a real "scatter brained" sort ...

Jc, you are so beautiful... wow. I need to go find the camera >< I feel like all the pictures of me are ugly! Gah. I must grow beauty.