Emerson

Hello there Norm ^_^ If you have a question about the site or need help with something feel free to contact me! I hope you enjoy the site and that ...

I'd go with what Sam says--she's good with this stuff. I suppose it would be aided if someone else wrote it for you and you edited it and sent it ...

I wouldn't admit I'm an expert at this, but being that I've written some things that made people cringe and want to go throw up, I guess that I know ...

Your method of coming up with an idea, I like. Especially since those words are such lovely ones, I could imagine writing a very nice short story with those. Most ...

You know I have to say I liked it, but I think the only thing that saved it was the rhyme scheme. It's theme is cliché, although only slightly, and ...

Knees buckle, pop as they hit the ground. Pain shooting up my leg, the voices in the backgroun d slowly blurring together, becoming indistinct. Ooer, Sam. It was emotional, but ...

total Disco mania. [uh, what?]

I don't have a job XD My mom is trying to push me to get a school year job now that I have my license, but my dad doesn't want ...

haha, the minus 10% thing? I heard thats true as well. Only because most of what is in your first draft is horrible, but for me and short stories, I ...

The world was dark when Lord Bore took over the world. I really, really want to cut out the second "the world" and make it a pronoun. I get a ...

I've already mentioned this as plagiarism, It's just taking a while for the people above to take care of it >< In the mean time, I'll lock this thread.

Blood lust took over every pore of me, until it was all I thought of, my every motion was driven by two crimson lines on his neck. make the comma ...

Hm. But see, to me, the scatterbrain feel didn't make it feel young, it just made it feel scatter brained. And you can still be scatter brained at 50, so ...

Without a word, clarence he walked over to his desk and grabbed a set of keys, returning to the lovers. “Sorry about the mess,” she called over her shoulder. Her ...

You spaced this one out! =O hee hee I really liked this. I didn't expect either. Was this a new plot idea? Really, really interesting, and shocking. No complaints from ...