Emerson

Punctuate, please please please. Poetry & Punctuation . This was way too abstract for me to enjoy. What are you talking about? I have no clue. You're just describe some ...

Hmmm I'm not sure what I think of adding stanzas or not. I'm more concerned about the content. Love poems, or any emotional poem, is really, really hard to write. ...

If you don't mind me asking, what exactly happened? It looks kind as though you hit traffic coming the other way. Uhm, basically. It's kind of hard for me to ...

Ah, Jasmin pointed out some good things. Word choice is very important when you are trying to make the reader feel, so read over and consider how you can make ...

I liked this ^_^ Kelly's explanation about the couplet helped, as well, otherwise I was left thinking, "Uhm, what?" I loved the imagery. I'm guess Donne is some author that ...

I took pictures. Sadly, I have no "before" pictures... Sigh. It was such an awesome car, too. I loved it! It smelled awesome inside. '98 Pontiac Grand Am, in case ...

You don't need all that spacing between each line, that's improper formating. You only need a line break (where there is a space) between stanzas. You have no punctuation! Ack. ...

I think Ed is spreading rumors... *gaspeth*

Nate's married? hmmm I didn't know this! Oh well, I don't pay attention.

YAY! That's so exciting... *sigh* I wish I was meeting Jack, too.

firefox ftw.

Every author I read inspires me in someway. Even if the book is really bad, then I can think, "Uck, okay, don't write like them," and I have been inspired! ...

Haha, a clash shirt? The oldest shirt I own is a Blondie shirt. It was actually my dads. It's slightly older than I am, and I have yet to throw ...

Bienvenue Teigan ^_^ Foamy is rather cool. I have a Tshirt that's about four years old... It's a Foamy shirt. Very old though. But since I don't grow, it still ...

Hmm... I'd want to look into it a bit more for myself, specifically. A [younger] friend of mine was sent something saying they won a poetry contest and it was ...