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Re: Bonjour! Ami's (as if i truly speak French) from Scherezade
So the one above me caught on with all those good questions to ask. :) But I guess I can still say Howdy, can't I? So welcome to the forums! ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Perfect Imperfection
I like the hopefulness that this story ends with. Having some very, very good friends going through eating disorders myself, it's always nice to think that there will be happy ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Penetrating the Pale Horse (2)
ooo First review is mine. :D If they were in her bedroom, she would have been scared. But since they were in some mysterious place, she only had one thought ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Penetrating the Pale Horse (1)
This is a great beginning to a story and I'm glad the second part's up, cuz I'm going to run off and read it right away. :) Like I said, ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Building Brand Awareness
What about this ~~~~~\*\*\*\ i LoVe ThE yOuNg WrItErZ sOcIeTy!!! /*/*/*/~~~~ ?
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Novels & Novellas (updated)
Sooo I just saw the Novel/Novella section today, and asked Rosey about it, at which point she directed me here. Coolest. Thing. EVER. I'm very excited about the new organizational ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
Welll since your signature needed an explanation I'm going to give it a 5/10. I know that's a poor one, but yeah. :)
May 5, 2010 -
Re: what writing level should be used?
I'm not entirely sure what to think of all that you said in the original post. For me, I don't feel like I have a set level which I should ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: How'd you do?
I failed pretty hard. Hahah. And as a result, I learned that school>writing most of the time. Which is a sad, sad thing.
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Spider Boy (A Modern Greek Myth)
I think this is a real cute idea for a story! A spider for a pet is great. I'm curious how this is based on a greek myth, though, since ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Underneath The Beech Trees
It's hard for me to not simply echo the previous reviews, then run away having said scant else. But I'll do my best to add more! Both were correct in ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Predator and Prey
Hey there! So I agree a lot with what Canislupis said. You have a great base for a plot/story here, but you're missing a few important pieces, mainly characterization. Try ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Is Anybody Out There ?
Time and time again I feel sick, like there is not enough blood going into my brain. My heart sometimes feel like stone. I love the imagery! This is wonderful. ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: A Mad Dash (2010 NaPo)
April 6 "Dead & Sexy" Bright, flighty wings with rainbow diamond studs spread out on the push-pin board; so alive with earthly hues, but dead like the autumn leaves. I ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: A Mad Dash (2010 NaPo)
[So I'm back on this horse, having written four poems in less than an hour, mainly because I've been promised m&ms if I finish. Mind you, these poems are bad, ...
Apr 6, 2010
