Emerson

[s]But at least,[/s] for now at least, I’m doing something. This is hopeful, it fits nicely. I think the scene with her friends could have been written better, and with ...

Ah, I have to say, this shows you are improving. You didn't tell us, or if you did, it was okay because the emotions were backed up by actions. Good ...

It annoys me that you neglect to mention Jon closing the front door. Jon glanced at the staircase, certain someone--or something--would be standing there, watching...waiting. I think you are missing ...

Except, when the quote is too short, it looks like this... [I'm too lazy to go to photo bucket atm so I just attached it.]

Oh. You say it is horrible and yet I loved it! [pardoning capitalization and punctuation follies] That was... beyond brilliant/beautiful. The imagery was wonderful, and "(am I killing you with ...

The Accused By Claudette “There are crowds of people all around, shouting, clamor, ten thousand face, ten thousand eyes—you have to bear it all, but the main thing is the ...

"No duh , " Julie mumbled, scrambling around, trying to find a flashlight or lighter. "And by the way, I wasn't worried." Pearl is my very best friend, but she ...

Livre OR Summer Reading By Claudette Letters on a page, In between two thick covers of Various colors, glare at me, Reminding me that I must read... Eventually.

I liked the idea, but I think I would like it more if I could get some emotion from the meaning of light and dark, and if there was more ...

What really bothers me is the bold letters and the spaces. To me, an acrostic should be written without putting so much stress, like you did, on the first letter. ...

I enjoyed this ^_^ I think I'll leave what others have said, because I can't find much to pick on. Though [and I hate to directly disagree with someone] I ...

I think I liked part one more. I also liked the first line, but I'm trying to understand it along with the rest of the poem, and with part one. ...

*feels stupid* I didn't realize there was a link. Her Royal Highness Claudette the Calm of Herring-le-hole

The footer looks amazing ^_^

I like the background on the first one, but the second one has to be my favorite. The way the petals are in and out of focus in certain places ...