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Re: My felix, my fortune
I liked it! Par the norm, I can only grasp and slightly clutch at the meaning ^_~ But in any case, it was beautifully written, and I could also visualize ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal: Coming In Print Soon!
Nate: I just thought of something. You will be accepting submissions from people outside of YWS, right? If so, you should try to figure out how to get it listed ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Rach
Guess who finally got around to this? :smt003 Scene One The 37 - year - old Albrecht Hearst was the vice-chairman of the public affairs committee in Vienna. At 1:30, ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Estora, Succubus
I'd really like to see it colored but otherwise, that is so cool! Why are one of the "hooks" on the wings not finished? I love how th wings look ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Hi!
Seems I missed this... Bienvenue Cuni ^^ It's good to be safe on the internet, and it's perfectly fine to be over conscious and not reveal your country. Be safe, ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: The Higher state of a Pacing mind.
eep. Chandni, you know how I struggle with your poems ^^; I enjoyed a bit of the beginning, the first three stanzas or so, but it still got confusing. But, ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Who Art Thou
Hmmm I liked the archaic-ness. But stuff like that is cool. I'm kind of indecisive on my opinions of this. It was cool, but then it was also really... empty. ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Visitors
I think it's cute, and I certainly could never writing in iambic pentameter. >_< A few lines didn't really... sound right: But be I wise to bring her seed. I'm ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: The Fence
This seemed real... erratic? I'm not sure that is the word I am looking for. I loved the comparison to the Berlin Wall, but I suppose that is the Krautophile ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Inevitable
Don't forget to punctuate! It's real important to poetry. ^_^ Poetry & Punctuation . This was cute, but it was written overly simple, and it did a whole lot of ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: thoughts of ten days.
Some quick notes on random things: please punctuate [ Poetry & Punctuation ] and capitalize properly, including the pronoun I. To the poem: it has a sort-of rhyme scheme, but ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Heyllo ;3
Bienvenue Mel ^_^ If you have any questions about the site or need help with something feel free to ask! Poetry is great, and I write tons of fiction, but ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Livre OR Summer Reading
Title meaning nixed ^_~ As to the meaning, I'm not entirely sure? It may have something to do with the fact that the noun la livre means book, but there ...
Aug 5, 2007 -
Re: Livre OR Summer Reading
Oh, Melia! I love you! The idea of switch the ellipse and the period is brilliant ^_^ I think it brings out the feeling even more. [I detest ellipses, but ...
Aug 5, 2007 -
Re: Kat's Art! (updated 09/25/07)
1. That is so cool. It looks just like them!!! 2. it reminds me of the girl in Greek mythology who asked the gods to turn her into a tree, ...
Aug 5, 2007
