Emerson

INFO DUMPS? When we’re writing, a lot of us sometimes hit things that in the writing world are called Info Dumps. Okay, now the pros are going to hate me ...

Have you ever had a scene where you really, really need the dialog to play a large part of the story? You have the scene written, you read over it. ...

yes they were wearing sweaters... it's 100 in MO. Thank goodness I'm in Georgia right now. ^_^ Nate> Did the kids attack you? It looks like it.

That is creepy... I think "tell me" is repeated a bit much, but it still works. I think you should add more to it though, to clarify what is going ...

Do not press the CCF. We are not above refunding your points and blacklisting you. hmmm I understand the "do not press" part--no one likes being bothered, and heck, you'll ...

Jon was finding it easy to open up to Trent, and reminded himself that he shouldn't trust anyone so quicklu. Typo A beetle crawled through the supraorbital, a piece of ...

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I've not much to live for? I'd probably go ahead with it. What's it matter if I get run over and break my neck? I suppose death is better than ...

I know deathly mothers well... First off, give is some more punctuation. Poetry & Punctuation . It was a good poem, in that it wasn't written badly but... it could ...

I don't..really..read poetry. Like, published stuff. -hides- I second that! -_- I'm trying to find more books of poetry to read so I can take my own advice. [It's amazing ...

Er, yes, her shirt looks a little odd in places. specifically over the boob to the views left. That's just an odd placement of it. In general, you might want ...

Hmmm it is better, but the flow is odd. And because you switch who the "I" is, it's kind of... odd, you know? You're switching the POV but still using ...

A tree is small enough to fit on a window sill...? This isn't bad, but I don't think that I like this style, you know? I suppose they are riddles ...

Jon bit his sleep, mind racing for an excuse to travel alone. Er-what? I have a feeling Trent is going to turn into a jealous spat ^_^

Nuisance? Never! is there a specific place where you can view peoples work and post your own? You have to find your way over to the literary section. To get ...