Emerson

Life raft, One-way radio, signal flares, two day supply of water, navigation chart. You can go a lot longer without food. I am horrible at swimming. I get really thirsty. ...

Yes! And I've been meaning to suggest it for a while but I just... never did. I hate that we have drop down menus for forums, blogs, resources, and everything ...

When they’d left Earth 's orbit, the time it took to get everything back to normal after a hyperspace jump had been a day. “Yes, Captain Ramsey,” t he AI ...

Znoink... You are soooo behind the times.

hmmm... The line breaks are better. Have you ever been in caves? I forget your geographical location... In Missouri, we have oodles of caves. I love caves. I've been to...four, ...

Oy, I feel bad for this, but I have to say I can't exactly think of anything to say. I'm going to have to come back and reread this some ...

hmmm Add punctuation. they sing of days where hope still had wings And sometimes the sky keeps secrets- it never speaks of years of forgotten memories. It seemed like you ...

I think I liked this, simply because I'm a complete gossip whore ^_^ And it was simple, and straight to the point. I usually hate poems like that! But please ...

I love alliterations but I think you used way too many here. It just suffocated me. And why are certain words punctuated? You would assume they have some great meaning ...

Preaching in poetry has always rubbed me the wrong way. Also, all you are doing is telling. Why not show us something? This message is something told over and over ...

Some kind of animal? a nocturnal one. I can't really pick it out. If I were to critique this I'd say fix the line breaks. Your lines are way too ...

Add the rings of Saturn! ...because there has to be someone out there that wants to hang out in a field of really fast moving rocks......

Can I put donations in for the processor? :D I love this site too much to let it die, and I love you too much to let you wallow in ...

hmmmm....I shall explain my understanding of the story in a minute. First! Random me shouting grammar at you despite the fact that we both know we disagree with each other ...

It's not fair! I voted before the Sun was on there... I want to go swimming in lots of fire and things! *pouts* hee hee