Emerson

I'm not entirely sure lack of punctuation is the best way to show spontaneity. For one thing, lack of punctuation more so shows chaos, disorder, and better reflects a speakers ...

I'm not entirely sure what to think of this poem even though I somewhat like what you've done in certain places. The beginning of it, the first three stanzas, is ...

but perhaps, as if they were nothing more than worthless dirt, They have scattered on the wind of my life. This is a great simile, but I think you're saying ...

Hey and welcome back to YWS! Just to let you know, I moved this thread to the lounge. The "Other" section is for literary works. I know, it's confusing. ;-) ...

I like the meaning behind this poem because it's something I can easily relate to, but I didn't catch on to the meaning until you yourself had said it was ...

Hello! So since I'm used to old, horror Jig (who I love A LOT) I expect something to jump out of somewhere and mystically tear these kids to shreds. Please ...

Hey there! I really love the idea/them behind this poem, coming out of your shell and darkness, falling in love, and finding hope in life through it. Of course I'd ...

Hi! And welcome to the YWS! The first thing to do, I would say, would be to write reviews! :) but you can also check out the info forums, the ...

Oy, there is so much from this I could comment on... First, someone talked about the fact that a rape victim should go through with having the baby. I say, ...

I can't remove an item from my feature items on my profile settings. I tried to do this a while ago, and it didn't work, so I just left it ...

Since this work is well over a year old, and people want to review, I'm going to lock it. There are a few other pieces posted (look through my portfolio) ...

I directly went to the motionless person lying on the bed. This is a very awkward sentence mostly because of "directly". This story has a good plot to it but ...

I guess my opinion might come in handy in a really weird way since I'm before 2009, but I didn't "grown into" the new site layout. Granted, I love it ...

I just skimmed Andy's review, but his bits on characterization are spot on. A sticky red pool with a gut-wrenching metallic scent. Also known as a puddle of blood. Blood ...

Hey there Cookie! This is a really cute story! I love the conflict between what the character felt during the kiss and the fact that she knows the emotions are ...