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Re: Hello I'm new
Welcome, welcome. :smt003 I think we already found each other? I believe I crit'ed something of yours... If you need any help around the site feel free to PM me! ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: truth in small portions
I don't really know what I thought of this... on some general notes, I think I'd like to see it with punctuation, and that you should either use quotes or ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: You'll Forget
Ah, as a note, if you need something moved, just PM a mod and they can move it! (Like me!) ^_^ The repetition kind of shot and killed it. Repetition ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Little Blue Birds
I'm not entirely sure I liked it, because there isn't much meaning behind, "Birds get pushed out and then they fly." For some reason, I'm seeking something more than the ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: intricate machinations
I saw this when you first posted it, but it needed to sink in, and I've come back to read it and am even more amazing. I think fall should ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Finger Paint
I remember: it was either yesterday or eternities ago, this is a good poetic line, but I hate it because "yesterday" and "eternity" have such a BIG gap that this ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: “Ticks”
Well, I didn't finish this! Eh...Oh! and I shall move it into scripts, since it is a script. This was... odd. I've read several plays, and non of them are ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: UMSL student allowed to leave Russia
Heh, well, it just goes to show don't randomly purchase things in case it is illegal to take them out of the country... She was supposed to have a court ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: It's my sweet 16!!!!
Happy Birthday sweetie ^_^
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: whatever tickles your fancy
in a field of violets or lavenders or whatever tickles you r fancy, I find it ironic that you have a typo in the line used for your title :lol: ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Retrospect: A Mix for Hourglass [Part I]
I need to download this...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: UMSL student allowed to leave Russia
ST. LOUIS (AP) -- After being held for 76 days in Russia, a University of Missouri graduate student is free to return to the United States. Contraband charges against her ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Him
This seems so perfectly romantic, that I can't help but like it. It reminds me of those times right when you have left a very nice event with your loved ...
Aug 31, 2007 -
Re: Centering Gravity
I like how, while reading it, the way the words spin and twist, you feel like you are dancing. Skillful. ^_^ The first three lines took me a while to ...
Aug 31, 2007 -
Re: nostalgia
Oh, I love it simply because I can relate to nestalgia! you have some lovely lines. The first two stanzas were the best, the last two... not so much. How ...
Aug 31, 2007
