Emerson

Hey Mike! Welcome to the website. If you don't mind I'm going to go ahead and move this thread to the Welcome section, where I feel it will be more ...

I love that I can view leaderboards from the front. :D I also love the change to the non-signed in version! I bet that'll really grab us members.

I really love the message behind this because I love the idea that love cannot be seen with the eyes. But, since you only spent a few minutes on it, ...

Now tell me, what is your price, to kill a man? No comma needed on the second line. This poem is very interesting because the tone and the tale behind ...

Hey there! So here I am to give my review. :) I really love some of the lines in this, and I love the detail you give in certain places, ...

Hey there! so I really liked that you tried to reinvent a brother's Grimm tale. I wish I could say more good things about this, but I guess it's just ...

Hey guys! I'm glad to see you're trying to make friends here, but keep in mind about Internet Safety (by Sam) . Your twitter accounts, or facebook accounts, can have ...

Fingers running up my thigh like runners on the track; you were gunna win the race, while I was on my back. Your lips would say I love you when ...

So, I've unlocked this thread because I'm reopening my requests. :D Look like this hasn't been open for almost a year! Just be sure to read my comments in the ...

Tenyo made some great points with the laughing while dying/funny lines - those are brilliant, but the rhyming sort of kills it in places. you're back to laughing and smiling ...

Hey there! I see you just joined the YWS today. :) Welcome to the site! Have you introduced yourself in the Welcome Area yet? I'm sure we'd all love to ...

Mary Sue or Marehasuey

The rhyme scheme in your poem completely reminds me of Robert Burns , which is awesome. I really love the story you have in this, it's very interesting and very ...

I really love the dark and evil mood to this poem. The death, the destruction, a child dying, a mother crying... hehe. :) However, I feel like your rhyme scheme ...

This is a very interesting poem because you're blending it with fantasy which I think is a great combination. I liked the beginning bit (first half of lines) the most, ...