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Re: Diction: Right Word, Right Time
Completely true! Colly, this was lovely. You went beyond the thesaurus, and also spoke about words that describe. The poem examples were perfect. I'll have to bookmark this so I ...
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Re: Unanswered Posts
Heather, you should make it a contest. The winner gets self gratification. :smt043
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: name association
I'm not even entirely sure how to say it? The Francophone inside me says Fee-ya-non but I don't think that would make sense to anyone apart from me...? Seems like ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
I'm not entirely sure what I think of it. It didn't help that when I saw it I said "bean" rather than "bin" (phonetically, that is). It doesn't tell me ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Indifference to death, I suppose? You can't very well be weak if you don't care they're dying, right? - Armin Furcht Hatred, of course. - Ludger Gottschalk Have you ever ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Elder's Secret (Removed)
She ran up the muddy hill with the bag of mallets they used in her hand. "used in" makes this sentence super clunky--almost difficult to understand. It makes sense, but ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: avatars!
I actually took that picture -- so it doesn't look as sharp/crisp as I wish it was. But I cleaned it up a lot for what it had looked like! ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: My cat eats yogurt!
My cat is so cool. Clip 1 Clip 2 :D
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: I could talk to you forever
Red things are either comments, something I've changed, or something I've added. “Then what’s this argument about?” Evelyn crossed her arms and leaned back as her mother struggled to remember ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Unanswered Posts
hahah Heather--This is lovely initiative. I'm sure Nate would be proud of you! I am. Forums are always going to have unanswered threads.... I'm sure many of them are very, ...
Sep 8, 2007 -
Re: Shotgun
A five shot Remington with pump action and a plastic magazine is my only companion in these halls. These concourses of rejection - Ad nauseum. Barrels the size of quarters ...
Sep 8, 2007 -
Re: she calls me beautiful
the lipsticks’ smeared on the pig; The apostrophe in this line seems unneeded? Unless I am missing something... I'm not really sure what I think of this--because I'm not entirely ...
Sep 8, 2007 -
Re: I can't outline!
Cal had lovely advice! There is also a user group called The Elements of Plot, I believe? We have a section on outlines there, and the user group its self ...
Sep 8, 2007 -
Re: New
Hey Vincent ^^ Glad to see you around! If you have any questions about the site, how things work, or need some help, feel free to PM me. :D Hope ...
Sep 8, 2007 -
Re: NEW
Hey there! Oh, well, you need help? I can help you ^^ If you have questions or are getting lost, feel free to PM me or contact me any other ...
Sep 8, 2007
