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  • Writing Tutorials Re: Diction: Right Word, Right Time

    Completely true! Colly, this was lovely. You went beyond the thesaurus, and also spoke about words that describe. The poem examples were perfect. I'll have to bookmark this so I ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Unanswered Posts

    Heather, you should make it a contest. The winner gets self gratification. :smt043

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: name association

    I'm not even entirely sure how to say it? The Francophone inside me says Fee-ya-non but I don't think that would make sense to anyone apart from me...? Seems like ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    I'm not entirely sure what I think of it. It didn't help that when I saw it I said "bean" rather than "bin" (phonetically, that is). It doesn't tell me ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    Indifference to death, I suppose? You can't very well be weak if you don't care they're dying, right? - Armin Furcht Hatred, of course. - Ludger Gottschalk Have you ever ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Elder's Secret (Removed)

    She ran up the muddy hill with the bag of mallets they used in her hand. "used in" makes this sentence super clunky--almost difficult to understand. It makes sense, but ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: avatars!

    I actually took that picture -- so it doesn't look as sharp/crisp as I wish it was. But I cleaned it up a lot for what it had looked like! ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Randomosity Re: My cat eats yogurt!

    My cat is so cool. Clip 1 Clip 2 :D

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I could talk to you forever

    Red things are either comments, something I've changed, or something I've added. “Then what’s this argument about?” Evelyn crossed her arms and leaned back as her mother struggled to remember ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Unanswered Posts

    hahah Heather--This is lovely initiative. I'm sure Nate would be proud of you! I am. Forums are always going to have unanswered threads.... I'm sure many of them are very, ...

    Sep 8, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shotgun

    A five shot Remington with pump action and a plastic magazine is my only companion in these halls. These concourses of rejection - Ad nauseum. Barrels the size of quarters ...

    Sep 8, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: she calls me beautiful

    the lipsticks’ smeared on the pig; The apostrophe in this line seems unneeded? Unless I am missing something... I'm not really sure what I think of this--because I'm not entirely ...

    Sep 8, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: I can't outline!

    Cal had lovely advice! There is also a user group called The Elements of Plot, I believe? We have a section on outlines there, and the user group its self ...

    Sep 8, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: New

    Hey Vincent ^^ Glad to see you around! If you have any questions about the site, how things work, or need some help, feel free to PM me. :D Hope ...

    Sep 8, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: NEW

    Hey there! Oh, well, you need help? I can help you ^^ If you have questions or are getting lost, feel free to PM me or contact me any other ...

    Sep 8, 2007


When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides