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Re: New
I'm curious to know how you got your avatar so big. Oo Anyhow, welcome to the site! If you need some help or have a question, feel free to PM ...
Sep 10, 2007 -
Re: Hello Evryone
Hey! Welcome to YWS. Why don't you tell us a bit more about yourself? Who are your favorite authors, what do you write? If you have any questions about the ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
I would wish to take back all the things I have done--but to do so you'd have to get rid of the whole war, and what did all of this ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: My Marine
Moved to Dramatic Poetry at the authors request .
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: New Playwright
Oh! Hello! Haha, it's so odd, I was just thinking about posting on how to properly format a play. #_# Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions about the ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Comments
Don't beg for critiques. :D
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Lolly & Ollie's Quest for Cereal
This isn't formatted properly for a script, and I know you wrote it in fifth grade and all because of the lack of funness :D But one should still format ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Romanzo(Romance.) It's in English.
The majority of this isn't written in proper script format. I have never read a single script that has quotes in it. You may want to do some research on ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Title: Injustice.
eh, as far as I know victims do talk in court. So I don't know where you are getting the notion that they aren't allowed to...? And if they are ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: The Chair of Wind & Darkness: Draft Two [1-4]: Closed
So, with the realization of a scanner, I scanned this! Note, I didn't scan the pages I didn't write on (What is the point of that :-P) and I was ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: A line for my lover Ch. 1
It told her—or at least, what she thought it told her--that midnight had come and gone, and then some. your first one is an EM dash (—) but the second ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: the weed on the road
As if to sing, “I’ll be here forever,” “when the night grows feral and bitter, I’ll be here.” And the flower breathes in life. You don't really need to end--and ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: We Had the World
It was too simple for me. The story behind it is nice, but it doesn't have much poetics to it. What is the difference between this and story? It's in ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Era and the Lost Child (edited)
The moon, hidden behind clouds, battled to shine light onto the world below. The rain was light yet quick and stung the eyes of those that stood against the wind. ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: inexcusable?
hmmm what is this book about?
Sep 9, 2007
