Emerson

I wasn't too fond of this one Mar, it just didn't give a whole lot. Some of the line breaks didn't work for me, and they ended up being real ...

I stood before the jury, awaiting the thud of the heavy wooden hammer to hit the table. The hammer is actually a gavel. If only it was that simple, these ...

As to the 9.11 verse of the Kor'an, one would initially think that it's not coincidence at all. Just to point out to Becky--and anyone else who missed the link--there ...

uh. I don't really get the wingdings part, honestly. Eh. This stuff doesn't seem very reasonable to me. It's taking the facts and twisting them so that you get what ...

I'm guessing this is a story? Stories don't go in the welcome section. ^^ So I'm moving it over to the "Other Fiction" place. Also, just as a note, putting ...

I didn't even notice the new one, honestly XD The only thing I am not liking is when it shrinks on some pages... *picture attached* But then sometimes it fills ...

This is Ok, but it's too simplistic for me to like. What emotion are you trying to make the reader feel? What do you want us to the of Pity ...

I like the first one. I think if you used an editing program to bring out colors or something like that it would be a lot cooler, but in general ...

I'm not sure the plot lines are meant to be linked? XD And her father is also her brother. XD

I'm not sure I agree? If someone was going up to give me a report on Hitler, I think I would dislike the presentation if it had slang or jokes. ...

I love any book suggested by Samichan. I will look for it. ^^

...swag?

I liked your first attempt better. This is all one big metaphor--but it doesn't really show. If I didn't know it was a metaphor I would think you were writing ...

ah, you are on my list too Stevya! I just forgot XD