Emerson

hahah, I liked it. It was so full of math-like puns and general puns and foolishness that it was hard not to laugh, and so I liked it. Awesome job. ...

Not a care in the world , not the sound of a motor, Just my paddle and I, not a care in the world. I think the edit right there ...

is there a place where you can find all the unanswered posts? If you go to either the literary forums or the community, above all the threads and to the ...

It's too long and cluncky for me (the English, that is) "pretty little rags" or "pretty little bones" would work but the "Rags and Bones" just fills it out too ...

You really need to read over and check your punctuation. In places you use commas where none are needed, and you should also consider semicolons, colons, dashes, and all the ...

It's a very good view and metaphor, but I honestly have to say I hate how you wrote it. The voice used in the poem feels somewhat archaic and unneeded, ...

Er. I struggled to fully grasp your meaning in this poem. It seemed all over the place to me. Perhaps it was because the poem desperately needs punctuation--that on it's ...

I think this would do better with imagery. Right now it's kind of a mass of commands, and perhaps I am not like everyone but I do not like being ...

Since I've gotten several out cries for the last line, can I ask: what should I do? Is it a matter of word choice, topic, description. Should I add imagery, ...

My friend is doing this weird-survey-ish thing and I told her I would help gather some information. Don't think too hard, you can give short explanations or go into detail--I'm ...

Oy. Well, finding him sane means he'll get more prison time, right? Although, I don't know how Russian laws and things work. That's incredebly morbid and creepy. It would make ...

Edit. :lol: Thanks everyone!

Hahah, he's gorgeous, but how can you watch a movie with him without realizing he plays a character rather than himself? He's brilliant for that. He's one of the only ...

Hah, this made me chuckle. I also thought of East of Eden and how Cathy gets rid of her parents. It didn't do that much for me though, because each ...

I already mumbled at you over this. I love the French, the irony, the sparseness of it. The lack of punctuation and capitalization completely favor it. I'm surprised someone hasn't ...