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Re: Just a bit of randomnocity!
I've seen this on T-shirts... It's not the original XD
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: understanding between Muslims and the western world
I think the confusion comes because you have Sunnis and Shiites. You can say "Muslim" and no one knows which you are talking about. If you don't know that the ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: I know what smiley we need!
I agree! Nate:
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: The Otherworld Chronicles
Hello there! First I'd like to say, welcome to YWS! You're new, yes? ;-) He was dressed in red and black finery, was balding and had a gaunt, pale face ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Bonjour.
Bonjour ^_^ ça va? Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions about the site or need help finding your way around feel free to PM me! Enjoy!
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Pretty Little Rags and Bones [Part One]
Samichan, Darling. Je te deteste.... I hope you can make that out, chérie? The nurses’ shoes struck the floor with a loud clap, and the y both jumped. She muttered ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Young Writer's Dream
When sea-serpent rises, when wild siren calls, We've only to write, and invent what befalls. This first line here is odd? I think maybe you should change it to, "When ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Silence of the Lambs
ooo. I didn't know there was a book? I'll certainly have to read it then! I tried watching one of the movies, but got a little freaked out early. This ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Randomnessssssssssssss
Just some notes: You might want to title your thread with the title of your story, or perhaps a brief blurb about it, rather than "Randomness" with all those letters ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Five Ways To Get Critiques
Very good tips! The funny thing is, three out of the five I have in my own "Before you Post" thread, and I don't think many people read that before ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Who's The Best YWS Character?
Pat by default. :lol:
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Jarkuu
The only epics I've read are parts of The Odyssey that school requires and The Metamorphoses by Ovid. So I'm not too learned in them. This is a good idea, ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Sestina: Royale
a young knight leap over his battle leap should be in the past tense, right? I really loved the idea behind it; gods playing chess with peoples lives. It's something ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Stars is back!
Don't forget to critique two pieces for everyone one you submit. ^_~ hah, I'm such a strict mod. XD Glad to see you back! I'll have to wander over to ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: House Cleaning
the parched tongue of flame should flames be plural? Something about this line didn't work for me. Then, a few lines later, you repeated the word flame. Fixing that will ...
Sep 15, 2007
