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Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"In the whole world? That's a good lot of people. Not sure I could choose." - Lindell "Favorite? Well I do thinks a great deal 'bout myself. Not sure I's ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: I am utterly confused...
If you're in the third person, you aren't seeing from her "eyes", her point of view rather. Imagine yourself as a camerawoman, taking in all of the information from a ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Can I Get a What?
These are the most adorkable things I have seen in a LONG TIME. I love it. My favorites are either "Eat this thing!" because it's so awkwardly cool and "SPACE ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I'd eats all them marshmallows 'til I couldn't eats no more, then I'd probably eats more." - Cash How do you feel about your toes?
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Are You a New Member? Read me!
In case your confused where to make your "introduction" I thought I'd do a quick explanation between the differences if of the About The Authors section and the Welcome Mat ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Hello
Hey there and welcome to the YWS! Just to let you know, I moved this thread to the Welcome Mat, where it will probably get more comments and the notice ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: ThinPrettySmartStrong --- Lost
Hey there! One thing that stuck out to me in this poem was that your punctuation isn't isn't real consistent. You have some punctuation - commas, semicolons - but they ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: This is disgusting (KFC)
Just cuz KFC is in the US doesn't mean that all US food is terrible. :P A lot of people DO eat healthy and avoid fast foods. (At least on ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Across The Pond Chapter 1
Hey there! I don't really have much to say about this on the positive end, not because it's bad but because nothing really jumped out as amazing, and you also ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: A Fragmented Reality
Hey there! One quick suggestion I have is to read over your work a few times before you post it. There are some obvious typos that you'd be able to ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Scholarly papers concerning the possibility of vampires
Some of them accurately point out that merely being bitten isn't enough to turn you - these physicists need to get their factzorz straight, they're thinking of zombies, yo - ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Handwriting: Cursive or Unjoined?
I selected both. My English writing is half print (unjoined) half joined (cursive) some letters I write in a more curved and joined fashion than other letters I write. My ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Bloodmaiden (Excerpt from my newly published novel)
Hey there! Welcome to the YWS. I'm not sure what you really want as far as a review since you've published this, but I figure I'll review it anyway since ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: YWS April 2010 Stats
I loooove statistics. Continue posting these or I will cry. ^^
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Want a Book? Go to the Vending Machine
As the saying goes, the only thing more addictive than nicotine is a good book. Well if they're not saying it yet they will be soon, now that a German ...
May 15, 2010
