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Re: Addiction
I meant to review this when I first saw it but at the time I just wasn't in the mood to write a review. So! Now I'm finally back to ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Hey there! Sorry this took me so long to get to. I actually read over it a few days ago, and then I wasn't real sure what to say plus ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Running Away
Hey there! The biggest thing I can say about this poem is that, since you wrote it so long ago, you should have considered the fact that this isn't your ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Gotta write a play!
I have an article on how to format stage plays, in particular. If you didn't see that one already, I can pull the link up for you. I've written two ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Title Feedback
It reminds me (the title alone) a lot of The Exorcism of Emily Rose . Maybe something without the "The__of__" pattern would work better. :D It Needs Time
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"What in the heck is YWS?" - Cash What's you happiest memory?
May 20, 2010 -
Re: This is called Art, right?
You won't get banned for it. :D It's pretty weird though! I like the dead flowers and butterflies. Also, for as weird as it is, you did a much better ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: "I'm nobody! Who are you?" - Emily Dickinson
Lava asked the question I like. :( "What do you write?" So hopefully you answer us. :P Anyhoo, welcome to the site! If you have any questions about stuff on ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: New to Young Writers Society
Welcome to the site (again?) When were you on before and what was your username? Maybe some of use will remember! Being that the site has probably changed a lot ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
7/10 I think it's kind of funny you say you don't have a signature, then have some links. :D But major props for linking to your WRFF thread! I should ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Rosebushes [p.1/2]
Hello there! So I absolutely love this because it's got all that kind of humor that The History of Tom Jones was filled with (even though I haven't finished that ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Confessions of a pissed off teen on suicide watch *Edit!!*
Hey there Jas! (May I call you that?) Got a review for ya! As far as small edits, I found it real inconsistent that your character doesn't care about religion, ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: I Could Really Use a Wish Right Now (1 of 2)
Hey there! Suzanne here with the review you requested! ^^ So I believe you wanted me to talk about flow and tone. Your flow isn't so bad, accept at the ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Frozen Rose - Part 1 (Rated for swearing.)
Heyo. :) My review as requested! There were just some small things in the story that had me a bit lost: This was the first time for all of us ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Plagiarism and Copyright Infringement
Really people, you're just asking yourself for a permanent ban from YWS. Actually, it is not permanent: The length [of the ban] depends on the severity of the plagiarized material, ...
May 18, 2010
