Emerson

I liked it, but then I'm not entirely sure what it was about. It was too long though, for me, I felt like the idea and meaning were dragged out. ...

I forget all the definitions for type of rhymes... There are some exact rhymes, and then there are rhymes that sound the same, but really aren't the same. Rose and ...

Really, that seems more like a novel synopsis than a story. First of, you have two lists. They aren't even in paragraph form, they are lists. Lists are bad! They're ...

It's so cute. :D

Well, pure erotic fiction. Many people would argue it isn't art, just as porn isn't art.

You could look at definition, but people do not burn/ban books because of definition, they are first ran through the human filter, the morality filter....And yes, where is the line? ...

hah. I love how it says: Australia (Times are for October smiley-face-with-sunglasses) hehe. Good luck!

Heh, Pros (Ivan? Oo) liked it. ^_~ That's a good sign. And I liked it too! The only thing I can really suggest is that he punctuates it, that would ...

Well, since this is your first post, welcome to YWS! I'm just going to run some rules by you. ^_~ 3. Members are asked to withold on submitting work until ...

Ah, well the difference with me was that I was allowed free roam with books, and not with anything else. Kind of bizarre, wouldn't you say? But my dad figured ...

A sick minded murderer, A cold hearted man, to take a girl's life to prove that he can. I would change the last line to "just because he can." It ...

that children should be protected from immoral or otherwise damaging works. The is--undoubtedly--the parents job. When I was growing up, my parents never censured my reading. And I'm glad they ...

Trident, I really cannot wait to read your novel. Promise me you'll post it so that I can admire it's beauty? Title: Death Machine Genre: Historical Fiction Summary: Set in ...

Your explanation helps a lot, and actually has given me a way to better critique the poem. Here is a link to another pantoum I found, and one I like ...

First of, don't forget to punctuate! This will help you: Poetry & Punctuation . It wasn't a bad poem, but it was a bit too scattered and abstract for me. ...