Emerson

Strangely enough, this time around it's shorter . I'm still debating whether to add more, so I just fixed what I had and left it open still. I love the ...

That's why I suggested you go with what you had in the third stanza. The world being rebuilt backwards is a fascinating image and a fascinating idea. Seconded! Even though ...

I've found a bunch of cool things with Stumble Upon. I found a web site where you can listen to people read a paragraph (in English) from tons of countries ...

I liked this more, because at the end you brought back the girls. Their small feet skipping down the straight and narrow crest of moonlight, the night bleeding out upon ...

Hey there ^_~ You already know me. I'm glad you found the welcome section!

Haha, I just got this new plug in for Fire Fox called "Stumble Upon" and it randomly gives me web pages tailored to my likes. I just found this simile ...

Oh, I mean to say we have a section of YWS dedicated to NaNoWriMo. We also have a post on the NaNoWriMo forum for everyone to say, "Hey!" and friend ...

NaNoWriMo Section :D

Yep, yep, and Yep ^_~ We actually have a forum section on NaNoWriMo. There you can find everyone who is doing it. :D

Yay for French. ^_^ If you're wanting it to be plural, Master of Shadows, it will have to be Maitre des ombres, otherwise d'ombre is singular. Master of shadow. I'm ...

Two!

Suzanne stared at Adelaide while Grif spoke with who ever it was that has wanted to speak to him. She wasn't paying much attention. "So I just have to look ...

I like the last stanza, but true you could remove it and not lose anything. It has a nice message, but does it offer anything beyond that? If you're considering ...

hehe, paranoia! And, being sadistic is fun..Any reason why you named him Rammstein? (I'm a huge Rammstein fan.) Sounds like you've got it figured out! Your character does sound kind ...

I'm not sure I like it, because imagining someones runny noise nastiness dribbling down their face is gross... XD ew. It also isn't how I imagine autumn. But that's all ...