Emerson

I enjoyed Twilight but her vampires weren't very well written. Or maybe I should say she wasn't very well at writing them? It was enjoyable, but she got incredebly redundant ...

I would cut out the last line. I don't think it really stayed true to the whole meaning of the poem, and was just kind of an add in. *shrugs* ...

Better yet, try avoiding dialogue tags at all? not "at all" but think of dialogue tags only goal as to remind the reader who is speaking. If that is the ...

Moved to fanfic.

if they sleep in a coffin or if they don't sleep at all. For about half of my story my vampires sleep in pits in the ground. XD They bury ...

Heh. I wrote a vampire novel last year. I won't be giving away my nonclichés! But, as a suggestion, try to come up with a unique way to pass the ...

Then this might help you. It's what I originally planned to do for NaNo, but then didn't need to. I think it's a very good way to plot, actually.

Are you not sure of the plot yet? Snow flake is for people who don't know what they are writing about yet. I outline in basic outline style: I. Chapter ...

I just wrote mine on a piece of paper and scanned it in. That's the easiest. ^_^

It's ok Nate. ^_^ We love you no matter what! (Or, I do!)

"YWS saved my life" 10/10 because it is SO true for anyone who joins YWS.

10/10 That is so kewl!

I'm going to move this to randomness because ads don't belong here. I went to the web site and didn't get anything. I may lock it/delete it in a while. ...

Snowflake method makes me want to die. I said I was going to use note cards this year, but ended up thinking about the plot so much that I could ...

I think I'm going to move this over to fanfiction. Since it is fanficiton. :D