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Re: User Profiles Have Just Been Updated
Thank you! Now creepers cannot creep on me. :D (sorry I'm such a weirdo!) Also, while checking this out for the second time, I noticed that it sent me right ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: User Profiles Have Just Been Updated
I adore that it looks like twitter. But I adore you more!! *gives cake* Edit: So, I roamed around and already have a stupid-silly issue. xD It's a wee bit ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: Is Self Publishing really that Bad?
I'm going to be talking about several things that I think make us all a bit uncomfortable: the publishing industry, self-publication, and e-books. I got stirred off in this direction ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: Bands you loathe
uuurghkdgkljf I heart Death Cab sooo much. Of course I only listen to two albums, but it's sooo delicious. I hate Taylor Swift. And owl city because they sound like ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
For being a super rad new JM!
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Like A Mirror
So, back for seconds as you requested. I'd just like to say first of all, not as a moderator but as a member of this site, I believe people shouldn't ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Let me go
Oooh, Darling! I love the meaning behind this poem. It's so easily relate-able and you have some great lines sticking here and there! The delicate rose, With the edge of ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Like A Mirror
Hey there! So, I'm here to hopefully give you a review that is more to your liking - although it probably won't be filled with compliment worshiping ness. This poem ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Yo, yo, yo YORU!
Hey there and welcome the site! If you have any questions about the site or something feel free to send me a PM. :) It's interesting that your English teachers ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Infodumping
The dream/flashback is a good suggestion, but I'd be careful with that. Dream scenes don't go well all the time and it might be easier to find other ways. Same ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Cutter
Hey there! So, I'm here to review the poem. :) Hope I'm not too rough on it. First off I'd like to point out your inaccurate use of semicolons, so ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: the five senses of sight
I can't say I liked this poem because I didn't understand it in full but I can say you have a good use of imagery. My first question - since ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: The City Below: Chapter One
Hey there! I agree with the others when they say you need to make it longer than it is, but instead of just focusing on that I'm gunna help you ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: A last dance in darkness
Hey there! finally got around to this. ;-) You've already got a lot of reviews so hopefully I Can say something useful. So, I'm a big fan of avant guarde ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: 360,000 words in 90 Days?
I think the reason it's in November is because it IS crazy. And then you've got thanks giving! (for the Americans) I've done NaNoWriMo four times, sort of. This past ...
Jun 2, 2010
