Emerson

My list of "You need to read these books before they eat you" [a joke my dad made*] keeps getting bigger, and I'm kind of scared... I'm still reading The ...

Just a suggestion: You might want to add spaces between each paragraph so that this is easier to read. And, from just glancing over your piece, you have a lot ...

I think this is on the border of being a really good poem. More towards the "not" side, but I don't think it would be hard for you to jump ...

I'm... not sure what I think about this? I don't see how the stanzas fit together. On their own, they're amazing, beautiful, but as a whole piece--and perhaps I'm just ...

I think my biggest problem with this was that some of the lines made absolutely no sense, grammatically, and that made it hard to read. Here is one example: Curiosity ...

Well, not to be insensitive [like Rigel ^_~ kidding!] but it isn't a good poem. It's more of a blog post. I'm not saying you shouldn't write poetry. Poetry is ...

oh why do the push me to the brink of life. alredy my time's elapsed and now i live with all this strife. I've gotta stay and waste away the ...

Ah, Cal, beautiful. ^_^ I love the alliterations, and the flow it gave it, but at the same time, it was jarring. And the last creepy, so morbid and beautiful. ...

My heart was meant fo r you Be sure to read over your posts a few times first so you can catch typos :) I think this would actually work ...

I saved a story as a draft so I could work on it later, now it is later and I don't know how to access my unfinished story! This has ...

You are like hot coffee on a cold day ; [s]but[/s] you always burn my lips when we kiss. I like it a lot! It's not really poetry with a ...

I think this poem would work really well spoken. Spoken poetry, beat poetry? I am not sure what it is. Otherwise, though, I'm not sure... The repetition doesn't really do ...

My head was cut off, but it was the only way to get me and the logo in the picture if I was going to take it myself. XD It ...

I really like the idea behind it, although you are making a generalization... everyone isn't like that. Just the scene/emo kids... haha. Take me for example! I go to school ...

I agree with Snoink. ^_^ For example: As like, is like a scar. I have no idea what that is saying...? And the last stanza is incredebly jumbled. I'd say ...