Emerson

Oh, oh, Nate! Does yours say, "YWS: Most awesome Admin Ever,"?

Bon Anniversaire, mon amour! (Forgive my bad spelling XD) je tame-uh.

Nasty pizza... not cool. If you like vampires, you should ditch Meyer and pick up Interview with the Vampire by Anne Rice. She's impressive, and really, she brought vampires to ...

Hey there Selen ^_^ Welcome to YWS! New members are so great... :) If you have any questions or need help finding something, feel free to come find me, or ...

I'm not a big fan of "free form" because everyone I have seen (mostly) try to write it on here uses "free form" as an excuse to ignore basic rules ...

I think I'll move this to Other Fiction, because poetry is more often than note in verse....and this is more like Fiction.

I hate to ruin it for you, but this isn't a good poem. It's too much you . A poem should bring something for the reader. I believe I said ...

I think the biggest problem with this poem is that, even though the title says what the poem is about... I can't tell what this poem is about. I appraise ...

I'm just going to hack it as I feel. ^_^ I'm dancing with the Reaper [comma] feet dragging across the floor as he spins me round and round. The crowds ...

Sponson, please do not encourage them...? Don't argue or spam the persons threads over critiques. This is for critiques, not for comments on the critiques.

First off, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or need help feel free to find me. :) I liked everyone but the ending. It was too rainbow-and-puppy-dogs-and-fluffy-white-clouds for ...

This is too short to be a poem... Not to say that poetry can't be short; but I also have to be able to understand it. I kind of get ...

his stone heart beating like a low [s]dum[/s] drum , and jumped. That is a really good line! But I suggest you post more if you want a real critique; ...

This sounds like a really great idea, Nate! I'd take up running it, although I already have a plan in the works, so... *shoves it off on Heather* ^_^

This is one of those poems that clutches me deep in the chest and holds me and doesn't let me slip out until at last... I'm done reading, and I ...